Friday, September 9, 2016

Andy's Thesis Responses

Response to Toward a More Perfect World

Knowles’ thesis explores the role of violence in the filmography of Clint Eastwood.  Moving chronologically through Eastwood’s career, the thesis chronicles the evolution of his views on violence and how he expressed them as both an actor and a director.  Knowles’ analysis traces the emergence of a central premise in Eastwood’s work: that violence is fundamentally cyclical and self-perpetuating.  In other words, violence continually begets more violence.  Knowles’ argues that Eastwood gradually confronts this realization over the course of his career, as demonstrated and manifested in changing depictions of violence in his films.
            Knowles utilizes other historians’ work primarily as a means of constructing a contextual scaffolding, within which he presents his own analysis of Eastwood’s films.  Quotations from secondary sources often bookend sections of Knowles’ own analysis.  This tends to lend credibility to his claims regarding the films themselves while also allowing for a clear presentation of his own ideas.

            I enjoyed reading this thesis.  Knowles’ ability to summarize scenes from Eastwood’s films (most of which I have not seen myself) in an engaging way made the thesis readable and helped to make his argument intelligible even to those unacquainted with Eastwood’s work. In a sense, by working on films, Knowles had at his disposal a ready-made set of evidence that acted both as the object of his analysis as well as hooks that could pique the interest of the reader.

Response to Race, Memory, and the Law

Unterreiner’s thesis describes the experience of Chinese laborers in the West at the end of the nineteenth century.  In particular, it focuses on the embattled Chinese population of Tacoma, Washington and outlines the racist backlash against them.  Much of the rhetoric surrounding Chinese people during the period co-opted the language of slavery to describe their condition as laborers.  Furthermore, arguments against the presence of Chinese labor sought to drive them out of the region and end their competition with white unionized labor.
In using an extensive blend of primary sources ranging from newspaper articles and speeches to legal decisions and letters, Unterreiner relies primarily on this portion of his source base to tell the story of Chinese in the Pacific Northwest at the end of the nineteenth century.  He quotes other historians periodically, but spends much of the thesis building his own narrative around the primary sources he gathered.
At times, I found myself struggling to keep track of all of the different people, places, and entities involved in the narrative.  Though Unterreiner crafted an exhaustive narrative account of his topic, at times I felt lost in all that was going on.  Furthermore, the “Interlude” section in the middle of the thesis seemed a bit disjointed from the rest of the story.

Response to The Fate of the "Negro Republic"

Dang’s thesis explores the significance of the Santo Domingo affair as an indicator of the lack of equality that would be achieved for African Americans in the post-Emancipation era.  Grounded in the proliferation of political and legal frameworks which allowed for white aggression and violence towards African Americans during Reconstruction, the thesis describes the dearth of progress made towards racial equality after Emancipation.  Ultimately, the Santo Domingo affair represented an inflection point for the United States, as it turned its focus away from racial equality and towards projects of territorial and geopolitical development.
            In incorporating the work of other historians, Dang often cites them while providing context and background.  By summarizing and paraphrasing without quoting explicitly, she is often able to present the relevant parts of their work without distracting from her own narrative and analysis.
            Stylistically, I felt that the thesis was structured quite well.  In particular, Dang’s introduction provides an extensive roadmap for the rest of the thesis.  In presenting an outline of the rest of her paper, she acquaints the reader with the issues she intends to explore.  This helps to clarify her argument and prime the reader to understand and engage with the rest of the thesis.  This makes the thesis understandable even while it explores complex issues.

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